Orange boy

I really fell what you are saying in the poem. the last stanza you wrote i connected with those lines this is a deep poem and I'd like to know ...

very nice poem. The imagery was very good kept me wanting to read more though in some lines i see some unneeded words, repeated words. other than that great.

really good poetry requires a really good understanding of language. You need to find ways to make words work for you. What words paint an image in your mind? What ...

I'm blind and deaf as sot to say. I respond to the one who speaks my name. Looking back and regretting my choice. I stand and raise my voice!! I ...

The pain that exist in the empty chamber of your heart. The days are years that move with haste,yet the pain is still fresh as the cold wind across your ...